Place Name: First Place Contestant Name: SwvaSun Entry Title: Odell's Landscaping Entry Credit: Angela Corvin Judge Comment: Clean ad but there's a lot of entry points for the reader. The one that people will typically go to first is the photo of the owner. I would have made this image larger and incorporated within the text at the top - like a news story. You want people to say - "Hey Johnny, I saw you in the paper." With that kind of feedback, he'll be an long-term advertiser.
