Place Name: First Place Contestant Name: Richmond Magazine Entry Title: Man in Motion Entry Credit: Harry Kollatz Jr. Judge Comment: Vivid lead. Excellent turns of phrases, like "generals sizing up worthiness." Gets my attention and keeps my attention. After reading, I feel like I've followed the evolution of Lukas and witnessed his growth. Well done.
Place Name: Second Place Contestant Name: Ashburn Magazine Entry Title: Piano Man Entry Credit: Jill Devine Judge Comment: Solid writing. Lead gets my attention. Ends with a strong quote. Good job!
Place Name: Third Place Contestant Name: Richmond Magazine Entry Title: Fall Arts Preview 2023 Entry Credit: Nicole Cohen, Adam Cheek, Harry Kollatz Jr., Julinda Lewis Judge Comment: Basic preview, but the pieces aren't drawn out and keep my interest. Nice job!
