Feature Story Writing (excluding Obituaries) ( Online)Back
Place Name: First Place Contestant Name: Charlottesville Tomorrow Entry Title: Charlotte Rene Woods Entry Credit: Charlotte Rene Woods Judge Comment: The only comment I would make is that they had too many facts inside quotes. Do that work of verifying or just cut them out.
Place Name: Second Place Contestant Name: Charlottesville Tomorrow Entry Title: Emily Hays Entry Credit: Emily Hays Judge Comment: I found some of the data visualizations in the first story unnecessary and distracting. The subsequent stories were slightly more focused.
